tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-695316785431033780.post3497577451935182792..comments2023-04-29T21:59:56.491+12:00Comments on Atawhai @ Pt England School: Cookie WritingPES Blogs Admin 2015Chttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06056638621298275709noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-695316785431033780.post-12872856852021254022016-06-16T09:55:59.070+12:002016-06-16T09:55:59.070+12:00Nice of you to write a nice nice sentence to shar...Nice of you to write a nice nice sentence to shar with Pt England school and I uish you have a good happy doy todoy room 24. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09280795655335229990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-695316785431033780.post-46308700605125610642016-04-04T18:20:53.284+12:002016-04-04T18:20:53.284+12:00A bubble gum smelling cookie that feels like concr...A bubble gum smelling cookie that feels like concrete!! that is a great imagination you have well done keep up the good writingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-695316785431033780.post-82160134882632009782016-03-21T11:45:42.956+13:002016-03-21T11:45:42.956+13:00Hello Atawhai, this was a great piece of writing. ...Hello Atawhai, this was a great piece of writing. I really liked the way you described that your cookie was circular like a moon. Maybe next time you could, say what the cookie tasted like. Keep up the amazing work. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com