I am a Year 5 learner in Room 9 at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand. My teacher is Mrs Siō.
Hello Atawhai, this was a great piece of writing. I really liked the way you described that your cookie was circular like a moon. Maybe next time you could, say what the cookie tasted like. Keep up the amazing work.
A bubble gum smelling cookie that feels like concrete!! that is a great imagination you have well done keep up the good writing
Nice of you to write a nice nice sentence to shar with Pt England school and I uish you have a good happy doy todoy room 24.