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Thursday, 18 February 2016

The Evil Home

Once upon a time there was a ghost it lived in a spooky house. There was some bats flying away. It was spooky inside and it was haunted. It was up the hill. After the vampire was going. To be a big zombie. It was the biggest in the world. It was at the spooky house. After the big big zombie a big vampire came. The zombie and the vampire was having a challenge. The vampire won.
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5 comments:

  1. Whaea Sophie18 February 2016 at 18:20

    Hey Atawhai. I like your picture. I thing that everoen in my class likes it to miss wilde ☺😊☺😊

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  2. Whaea Sophie18 February 2016 at 18:24

    That's a cool picture and a interesting story Atawhai.

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  3. Unknown19 February 2016 at 14:41

    What a spooky story, it would scare me to see bats flying out of the house.
    Thanks for sharing your story Atawhai.
    Mrs Garden

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  4. Unknown19 February 2016 at 18:17

    I like your imagination Atawhai it goes with the picture you chose. Ka pai! I cant wait to read your next story.

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  5. Angelo11 March 2016 at 11:24

    Interesting writing Atawhai. I like your imagination.
    I got goose bumps just reading it cant wait for your next story
    from Angelo

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