Cookie Writing

Like the moon, my chocolate chippie biscuit is circular. The chocolate biscuit looks like an egg. Both of the biscuits are hard. It has cracks inside. It feels like concrete. It smells sweet like bubblegum. 

All About Me

Hi my name is Atawhai and l am six years old.  l go to  Point England school. I live in NZ  with my mum and my dad. My favourite food is pIzza, yum! I like to learn to read because so l can learn to read. I like to do maths  because it is so amazing .