Narratve writing

Once upon a time there lived a lovely girl named Amy and a handsome boy named Jack. They lived in a cottage in the deep dark forest. They went into the forest to pick up some strawberries then they were lost in the deep dark forest. She was sadder than she ever been. Then the wolf came. When the wolf came Amy took a deep breath. She ran away in the woods Next Jack came. With a stick on his bag she was horrified that the wolf got her with his claws. In the end Jack  found Amy. Next to the frightening wolf Jack threw a stick at him. He got the stick with his claws Amy snuck behind him. She pulled his tall then he ran away. They  hugged eachother and they were crying. They lived happily ever after.