EXPLANATION WRITING/ Lockdown

 EXPLANATION WRITING 

T	Title - What you will be explaining?
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

IDEAS - 

Title What is your writing topic?	My Lockdown experience
Introduction	Hook your reader - write a question, a statement or a definition about your topic Hey Cuzz, fah we cant even go to Koros tangi eah.  He has to stay in the freezer at the morgue until we are allowed out of our house.  That's sad as man.   Tell your reader what your topic is about and what 3 elements you are going to  explain
Information	Start with First OR Firstly...  Tell your reader about your FIRST element  (1 -2 sentences) First they told us we could be with him then only the old people went.  It's for our safety, they said.  Covid is a killer, but I wear my mask and disinfect my hands. They don't care about how we feel. -Explain your FIRST  element -Give an example of your FIRST element (3-4 sentences)
Information	Start with Secondly OR Next OR Also Tell your reader about your SECOND element (1 -2 sentences) It's already been a month and we are moving to level 3 soon so hopefully we can take Koro home.  Some of the Whanau were talking about cremating him, he has been alone for too long my poor Koro.  But he would get up and slap us if we did, it is not our tradition none of this is, heck we can't even hongi when we see each other.  -Explain your SECOND idea -Give an example of your SECOND element (3-4 sentences)
Information	Start with Finally OR Then…   Tell your reader about your THIRD idea (1 -2 sentences) Anyway cuzz sorry that you can't come over and be with us.  I’m not even sure we're allowed to travel home. We have borders now cuzz.  With cops and everything.  It’s scary as, Our generation's shouldn't be living like this. -Explain your THIRD idea -Give an example of your THIRD idea (3-4 sentences)
Summary	Share the three elements you have written about again - try to use some different words/phrases (1 -2 sentences)  Finish your writing with a question OR your overall opinion about the topic OR an interesting statement about the topic for your reader to think about  (1-2 sentences Anyway cousin If you get your vaccinations you can come home and isolate at our home together, before hopefully we can get home to see him.  And then we can hongi.

What do you meme - Mr Goodwin your career will go somewhere (in 3 years)

Today, We learnt how to post from our Email, Mr Goodwin this is just payback for not coming to netball, and leaving school.

Pt England School, 130 Pt England Rd, Auckland 1072, New Zealand

Types of superheros - Reading

For this task, We were learning types of superheros, For example a comic hero, Like Superman or wonder women! My favourite comic hero is Iron man! Whats your favourite superhero?  Does he keep his powers/Identity a secret? or does the whole world know him! Feel free to comment! 

algebra: Maths topic

 

For this task, We were Learning algebra or basically understanding algebra.

Olympic project topic - Young athletes

 

For this task, We had to pick a topic about the Olympics! Me and my panther Finau decided to pick Young athletes! we are still carrying on but i can't wait for the finish result! 

Colours in Maori!

 

For this task we did Maori! this time we had to learn colours!  

Valerie Adams

Valerie Adams is a New Zealand shot putter. She is a four-time World champion! She has a personal best throw of 21.24 metres outdoors and 20.54 m indoors. She has 2 wonderful girls and is happily married!, When she was 36 she got a sliver medal and another person got a gold medal but! The next day Valerie Adams won the gold medal due to the person who got the gold medal was taking illegal equipment! She now is happy in her life! 

 

Term 2 Reflection

                   Term 2 reflection 

The best part of Term 2 was FiaFia, Because everything was amazing and it went well. My Favourite Group had to be the a Cook island group! But the hardest part of Term 2 was Getting used to the work. But I Learnt something and that something was Area or a Square and Hour time! I can't wait for Term 3! 

    

Solve time problems! - Maths

 

For this task, We had to Solve time problems! Well basically in hour time. This includes lots of different characters and lots of Problems for us to solve!

How to be a good leader?

 How to be a good leader? 

Kia ora, Im Atawhai and today i am going to tell you something about how to be a good leader. Let me give you an example: are you a good leader?

 Well one way to be a good leader is to be responsible for your actions, which means to always keep your hands to yourself, And we all know that Koreo because it's mostly common in pes. Let me say more about a good leader.  

Most people have different types of perspectives, for example: A bad leader, A selfish leader, A Hogger leader and the leader that takes all the credit. But to be a good leader is to respect the team that you have and to always be brave. Thank you for listening and I hope this gave you reasons on how to be a good leader.

Task description: For this task i had to create a piece of work that tells us/you how to be a good leader, I hope this gives you information to be a good leader!

Revise the clause - Reading

 

For this task, We has to Create a simple Reading which is "Revise the clause".  This includes Nouns and Pronouns and ect.

Hour time - Maths

 

For this task we had to tell time in hour Time, We would love to see Mr Morans dad come by and tell us more about hour time.

 

Ko te aha tenei ra - Maori

 

For this task, we had to Recreate These Maori words in the Proper Photo. 

Cybersmart challenge - Week 6

This is week 6 cyber smart challenge from Mr Goodwin. Also thank you Mr Goodwin for putting these cyber smart challenges for this whole year! 

Turbulence - Paul Mason

 

For this task, We had to read a Story called "Turbulence" and its from Paul Mason. If you don't know what Turbulence means well then search it up.

Kiwi Kids news - What are Climate rights!

 

So this is the same as the other two down below! But this is about our Climate rights! 

Kiwi kids news - Nebraska man Makes 60 naked sky dives!

 

A Nebraska man set the new record of " 60 Naked sky dives ", His name is Rian Kanouff  and yes he is Nebraska. I have no idea why he made this risk of doing 60 naked sky dives, But lets hope the camera mans okay. 

Tornado - In Papatoetoe

 

For this learning he had to learn about a tornado that had hit Papatoetoe in the weekend. 

We pray for the people that are now homeless and we pray for the other two people that lost there lives to soon. 

What is a Quality blog post? - Cybersmart Challenge

 

For this task, We had to recreate a page of what makes a quality blog post! This also can show a great example for other students who need a little lift to make a high stranded blog post! Hope you enjoy this blog post! Come back soon to see more of my learning! 

What are the four spheres about?

What are the four spheres?

Introduction - what are the 4 spheres? What’s this report about?

The 4 spheres are the main elements of our earth, This report is for our actual report that will soon go in our parents hands? 

The Geosphere

The Geosphere describes the land and rocks on the planet.

The Biosphere

The Biosphere describes where Life can be found. 

The Hydrosphere

The Hydrosphere describes the water the flows thru our 

The Atmosphere 

The Atmosphere is the air that surrounds us and Nature.

Conclusion - what was this about?

This is about the four elements or spheres that are important to us in our world. These four elements help us survive and these elements tell us that no other planets have these elements. 

Simplify Factions

 

This is all about Fractions! 

The Sun of our star!

 

This is all about the earth and other kinds of planets! 

The Jacket Part 6

 

Now this is the first time our literacy read a whole novel, Which also means we finished The Jacket!

The Jacket Part 5

 

This is part 5 and today we also meet two new people! 

FiaFia Night!

 Yesterday night was Fiafia and it was amazing! Teachers were crying and Parents were proud. Today i will be talking about Fiafia which includes what group is my personal favourite, Why? and ect. What Group was MY personal Favourite my favourite group was the Cook island group, Because there Movements where smooth and calming, I also loved the solos that the girls did!  my favourite part was the food there was hangi,cakepops,custard pie,Barbecue,Otai and heaps more. something i learnt was to open your mouth while singing.  Next time i hope that twice as much people come!

The Seasons

 

This is what causes the seasons and what kind of zones there are.

Art of the Sentence

 

This is my Literacy task for today and it is about nouns and more!

Extension Week 4 - Pollution Air/Earth

This is my extension task for today. Today we were making start on our project but a new one for this term. Adriana and Finau are in my group. Our topic is pollution. We haven't don much we we are still working on it. I hope you have enjoyed this post. Please leave a positive comment on my blog. Bye!

The jacket part 2

 

This is The Jacket part 2

Leadership!

 

This is my learning for today and it is about Leadership!

Lab equipment's

 A couple weeks ago my tech group learnt about different types of science equipment's which is a Petri dish which is a Laboratory glassware, Thermometer which is something to test temperature and ect, Bunsen Burner which is a kind of gas burner, Pipet which is for transferring or measuring out small quantities of liquid, especially in a laboratory, and lots more. I can't wait to use them in the future!

Matheson bay

 Our trip to Matheson bay went amazing, There were volunteers that helped us. Snorkelling in the dark blue water was amazing there were lots of animals that include large starfish, Snappers , Kina/kina shells and lots more, It was like a dream. On our second activity we went for a bush walk which went amazing. There was strong webs too, I hope i can go there next year!

PH Research

 

This is all about marine life and what we need to stop doing!

The Four spheres!

 

Today i did research about the four spheres or Elements!

Water worries!

 

Parts of speech

 

The Jacket!

This is my Reading task for today we learnt to respect other cultures!

 Thank you for reading my blog!

How other planets were discovered!

 

This research is about Galileo and how other planets were discovered! 

Planet Earth

 

Mrs West gave us a scenario about earth? Like Where would we live if earth was dying and etc. This was our project for the year 7&8 Extension this term. Me and my Partner Finau are working on Pollution and the air and also how is it affecting us? How me and Finau are going to work this out is to narrow it down until we get less answers but also efficient answers that describe what were talking about and for it to make more sense for us. Anyways I hope you enjoyed this post. I will give a update Next Week!

 

Destination: Planet Earth

 

This is a story with a guy named Rune who wants to be a Pilot (Runes also a alien) 

Tallest Tower!

 Today My Reading group did a challenge, The main thing we had to do was who can build the Tallest tower with only Pipe cleaners and Straws! It was pretty difficult because they wobbled a lot!, The reason why my team was able to come second was on how we communicated and participated. in the end we built a big Tower if i say so myself.

Spot the food

                                                                              Good morning!

As you know we are doing a group art project near anderson avenue and this is just a little summary on what my group is doing. What my group is doing is Spot the Food! we have done a little slideshow to show some ideas in our group. We have done heaps of kinda foods even cultural food!

Here is some photos to explain!

Extension

                                       

Today me and my Mate in extension improved our work!

As you know we have been working on a street project with Toby and Bhav! It was very hard to understand what they wanted but we all made a plan on how it will work. My Partners are finally happy on our finished project and were looking to add more stuff to this project!

Why do we Celebrate ANZAC!?

 

This is a little something that my literacy class did and it is about "Why do we Celebrate ANZAC"

The Evolving flea

 

This is a text about a flea that is the size of a small bumblebee! 

The sons of Ma'afu

 

This story is about Two sons who do bad things and get sent away

Nouns

 

What is a noun you may wonder, Well this explains what nouns are!

Bookmarks!

 

This has a explanation on how i do with bookmarks enjoy!

Special Taonga!!!

 

This is a slide about people Taonga it can be a Necklace,Teddy bear or even a chromebook. The last few pages is about my special taonga! Enjoy.

Witi Ihimaera

 

This is about information about Witi Tame Ihimaera-Smiler whos an new zealand author, That also wrote "The Whale rider" who ended up being a big hit.

Maui

 

This is my learning and it is about a family going fishing and spotting a maui fish.

About me

 

This is about me and what i want to do, It also says what inspires me and who.

Explanation Writing

 This is an Explanation Writing for Our test.

Write 3 ideas here: 3 ways to be a good leader

1. A Listen

2. B Supportive

3. C Protective

How to be a good leader

Introduction: What is a leader?

What is a leader you may wonder, A leader is a person who's ahead of the pack and carries the team throughout everything. 

Body P1: One way

Topic sentence: One way a leader can be a responsible is showing your team/group that you care about them, Also showing them that they can trust you to be a leader. 

Body P2: Another way

Topic sentence: Another way someone can be a leader is to be Supportive on other people’s Ideas, They can also be supportive on how they dress or look like.

Body P3: A third way

Topic sentence: A third way you/someone can be a leader is to have a positive attitude, Without a positive attitude you wouldn't have other peoples trust, you have to put a smile on your face and always be helpful.

Conclusion: Remind the audience how to be a good leader - list the 3 ways

Responsible: Make sure to be a role model to every person there.

Supportive: You have to support other people if they are going through rough times.

Positive attitude: Make sure you have a positive attitude everywhere you go so it makes other people feel happier 

Ghost Walk

 

Today i read a book called "Ghost Walk"  which describes a old man and a girl going for a walk at a Red zone. This also describes what place is special to me and why it is. (At the end is a couple pictures of my special place and homeland)   

Things that make me write

 This is a couple things that make me write

Music

Ideas

Brains

Barinstrom

Silence

Chromebook 

Water

Week 4 Literacy

 

This is about Josh Millar and how he hates Mornings 

Also there is a Paragraph about Mrs Stone getting Married!

Add don't subtract

 

This is my maths for today and it is about add don't subtract.

Maths

 

This is my math intro for this year!

Feelings

 

This is my second task for literacy this Morning. it explains how would the Characters Feel in this situation!

Enjoy

The Rip

 

This is my literacy work. today were read a book called the rip! enjoy

Word art!

This is my word art. All of this includes what a perfect student people can be!